T3+Writing


 * __ Week 8 September 19th - September 23rd __**


 * An adverbial phrase is a group of words working together to do the same job as an adverb. **

WALT: recognise and use adverbial phrases in our writing. SC:We will know the following:
 * a noun
 * adjective
 * a verb
 * an adverb
 * what an adverbial phrase is

Hard plastic paddle whacking the water multiple times racing at 200kph Yellow & Red kayak speeding though the finish line at a heart racing speed.

Thursday 15 september 2011 WALT: Follow the fetures of a recount S.C DAY ONE- Tramp, Cooked meals, Set up rooms, Night walk, Spotlight DAY TWO- Swimming, Loop Track ( Bush study), Fire lighting, ABL ( Adventure based learning ), Burma Trail, Spotlight DAY THREE Activity day one, Spotlight, Possum hunting, Swimming & Bon fire. DAY FOUR Activity day two, Spotlight, Camp concert DAY FIVE Clean up, eel, Clash of the camp, Scavenger hunt, Home :(
 * Recall past events
 * Use personal pronouns
 * Has an introduction, Middle and conclusion
 * Is written in past tense
 * Is sequenced in order
 * Tells us What, When, Were, Why and Who
 * Personal comments
 * A recount retells the event in the order it occurs.
 * conjunctions to connect time
 * Noun- Climbing, Sam
 * Verb- Run
 * Adjectives- Big



__Harry the hip hippopotamus.__

At the gates it looks normal but once you step foot in the zoo you are surrounded in animals. There is one animal in particular I love the most that's the Hippo. The hippos name is Harry the Hip Hippopotamus. Harry is a huge Icon to the zoo. The one thing he loves the most is solving puzzles. Children would play Hungry hungry Hippos with harry. He wackes the hippos determined to win with a huge thump. Harry dose not like running races because he is as slow as a snail. he lives in a encoshure big enough for his sister Gloria // I like the starting, but felt that the story could have been more interesting, what sort of puzzles does he like to solve? what is hungry hungry hippos? good alliteration but describe what you are writing rather than just fulling the requirements. what is a huge thump? // // Next learning steps // // Describe what you mean so a reader like me knows what you are trying to write. // // When you say its big enough for his sister Gloria, how do i know how big she is? // // Use more language features such as adjectives. //

__//22.8.11//__

My dream house

My dream house is located down a country lane near the sea. It has three floors, The bottom floor is split in half one half is a stable block for some of my horses, and the other half is for my boats and car. I have a few boats I have a P.class, Starling, Laser and Hobie cat. I also have a launch and a biscuit and a rocket to play on. On my third floor I have my bedroom with a huge window overlooking the sea. Up stairs I have my lounge sweet, Kitchen and a lift if I didn’t want to take the stairs all the way to the top of my house. My house also has a balcony out by the sea. Im proud of my house i wish i could really live there.