T1+Homework

Bay of Plenty Tourist Attraction This is a fantastic slide of information Elly. Beautiful background image and excellent use of colour. Very well done! =Miss Crone :) ﻿ = = Hey Ells, well done. = = Mum =

**Christchurch City Centre** = =

You have tried to fit too much information onto this slide Elly and it has started to look a little messy. With less images this could have been prevented. Think about how you are going to make your information look attractive as well as inform! Keep your questions simple so as to not obtain too much information. Miss Crone :)

NZ SPORTS TEAM

Some excellent information on this slide Elly, well done! Excellent images selected also. Try to think about your layout and how you are going to combine your images and information though. It doesn't look very attractive - it seems all over the place! Miss Crone :)

This is my NZ author project  

What is the name of Gun's book? You haven't included this in your information? Don't you think that's pretty important? A very well presented slide Elly, your information looks a lot better set out this week. Well done. Miss Crone :) Hey Ells  I can see why you missed putting in the title as it is up in lights on the cover of the book "X-Rated". But fare comment, for those new to this book, they wouldnt have a clue. You need to look at it from the other persons perspective. Yeah!